Excerpt from my new novel

Here’s an excerpt from the beginning of A Very Darcy Christmas, now available for pre-order.  It will be released on Amazon on Nov. 27th.

“Mrs. Darcy, there are people downstairs in the entrance hall who say they are your parents.”
Disdain dripped off every syllable Giles uttered. Elizabeth pretended not to notice. Every day Pemberley’s butler demonstrated that he did not approve of the upstart country lass his master had married. In the months since William had brought her home as his bride, Giles’s friendliest tone of voice could be described as frosty. On the other hand, Mrs. Reynolds, the housekeeper, and the majority of the other staff had been most welcoming.
Elizabeth rushed to her feet. Her parents should be safely ensconced at Longbourn for the Christmas season. What could have brought them to Pemberley unannounced?
She hurried from her sitting room and followed Giles down the grand front staircase, her heart contracting with every step as she imagined what kinds of evil might have befallen her family. Her mother and father were indeed standing in the hall.
Their rumpled, travel-worn attire contrasted noticeably with the grandeur of the room. The inhabitants of Pemberley called it the marble hall because of the black and white marble squares covering the floor as well as the classical statues set in niches along the walls.
It was an impressive room, meant to stir amazement in Pemberley’s newly arrived visitors, and from the expressions on her parents’ faces, it was having the desired effect. Elizabeth had been duly impressed when she had first arrived at Pemberley, but now the room reminded her of a mausoleum, grand and cold and forbidding. She and Mrs. Reynolds had recently finished decorating the room with holly, evergreen boughs, ivy, and mistletoe for the yuletide season. The greens softened the room’s sharp edges, but it was only slightly more welcoming.
Her father’s careworn face relaxed into a smile when he saw her as if her presence made the unfamiliar surroundings more bearable. He does not seem overly alarmed; perhaps the situation is not dire. However, the moment her mother noticed Elizabeth, she commenced fluttering her hands and breathing rapidly as if she had experienced a terrible shock.
In other words, everything was quite normal.
Before Elizabeth could open her mouth, her mother launched into a torrent of complaints. “Oh, my dearest Lizzy! You do not know how we have suffered. The ruts in the road and the quality of the coaching inns! And there was a most disturbing odor in Lambton when we traveled through.”
Standing by the ornately carved front door, Giles watched this performance with a pinched mouth and lifted chin that left no doubt as to his opinion of the Bennets.
The best Elizabeth could do was to treat her mother’s shrieking as if she spoke in a normal conversational tone. She embraced both of her parents. “This is a surprise! I did not expect to see you so soon. Is something wrong?” She searched their faces for signs of agitation. Had something happened to one of her sisters?
“Everything is well,” her father assured her.
Mrs. Bennet gaped at her husband. “How can you say that, Mr. Bennet, when we have heard the most frightful news imaginable?”
Fear gripped Elizabeth’s chest. “What has happened?”
Her mother drew herself up to her full height. “Meryton is about to be invaded!”
“It is?”
Her mother’s head nodded vigorously. “Mrs. Long was the first one to rouse my suspicions.” Now she lowered her voice. “There have been a great many strange men visiting Meryton—speaking in French accents!”
Mr. Bennet rolled his eyes. “Fanny, I explained that both of the men are laborers from Ireland. They speak with Irish accents.”
Mrs. Bennet put her hands on her hips. “And how would you know a French accent from an Irish one? Mrs. Long met a Frenchman when she was one and twenty. She knows how they sound!”
“Mama—” Elizabeth began.
“But that is not all,” her mother continued. “Colonel Forster’s regiment had been wintering over in Meryton as before, but then they decamped suddenly. Called away, just like that! I wager they are in Brighton at this moment, preparing to fend off a ferocious French assault.”
Elizabeth bit her lip to stifle a smile. “I have read nothing to suggest that in the papers.”
“Of course not!” Mrs. Bennet waved her handkerchief dramatically. “The authorities do not wish to stir up alarm. But why else would they have called the regiment away?”
“There was political unrest in the North,” Mr. Bennet murmured.
“Mrs. Long does not believe it,” Mrs. Bennet said with a dismissive nod. “And what is more, Mr. Long does not believe it. He was in the militia for a year in his youth and said such orders were highly irregular.
“Fanny—” Mr. Bennet started.
Her words continued unchecked. “An invasion is imminent. Nothing you may say can convince me otherwise.” She folded her arms across her chest.
Elizabeth feared this was the truest statement her mother had uttered since arriving.
Mrs. Bennet continued without even taking a breath. “And, of course, Meryton will be one of the French army’s first targets.”
“Before London?” Elizabeth asked.
“Well, London will be well-defended. Meryton no longer even boasts a militia!” Mrs. Bennet flicked open her fan and vigorously fanned her face. “Mary and Kitty refused to leave Hertfordshire. Even Jane would not listen. But I told your father I was coming to Pemberley. Since it is so much further north, we have much less of a chance of being slaughtered in our beds.” She folded her fan again. “How very clever of you to catch the eye of a northern man.”
Having never considered this a feature of her marriage to William, Elizabeth did not respond.
“I pray you let us stay here for a while. What say you, Lizzy?”
Elizabeth gave her father a helpless look, not knowing where to start unraveling her mother’s convoluted reasoning. Mr. Bennet offered her a defeated shrug. Apparently he had given up on reasoning with his wife.
Well, she could hardly turn away her own parents. Perhaps she could talk sense into her mother during her visit. “Yes, of course, Mama. I am very pleased to see you both!” She smiled at them. “Welcome to Pemberley.”
Her father gave her a rather sad smile, but her mother grunted in response. “Now, if you will have them show me to my room. I am greatly fatigued by all this travel!” Now that their immediate fate had been settled, Mrs. Bennet eyed the hall critically. “Oh, Lizzy!” Her hand flew to her mouth. “You have hung greens already!”
“They make the house more festive,” Elizabeth replied.
“But it is bad luck to hang greens before Christmas Eve!” Her mother’s eyes were round with concern.
“Just a superstition—” her father interjected.
“No, it is not!” Mrs. Bennet exclaimed, wringing her hands. “Mrs. Taylor hung her greens early one year, and the very next day their chickens refused to lay a single egg! She never made that mistake again, I will tell you.” She pointed an accusatory finger at Elizabeth. “You have practically begged the French to invade.”
Elizabeth rolled her eyes. “I like the greens.”
Mrs. Bennet’s hands fluttered. “Well, don’t blame me when the French invade. I warned you!”
“I promise not to blame you, Mama, if the French invade.” Elizabeth gestured to the butler. Perhaps her mother would be more rational after she rested and freshened up. One could only hope. “Giles, I think we can put my parents in the red bedchamber.”
Giles’s expression could not possibly have been haughtier, but he gave a slight bow and left to summon a maid. As the maid led Mrs. Bennet up the stairs, the older woman warned the wide-eyed girl about the imminent French invasion. Elizabeth and her father fell behind, staying out of earshot.
“I apologize, Lizzy,” he said. “Trying to stop her was like trying to halt a runaway carriage. When she declared her intention to visit Pemberley with or without me, I thought my presence might mitigate the damage.”
Elizabeth took her father’s arm. “I am very pleased to see you both, Papa. And it will provide an opportunity to show you Pemberley.”
He smiled gently. “I must confess, that is something I am anticipating with pleasure. What I have seen so far is quite grand.”

Elizabeth gave her father’s arm another reassuring squeeze, but her spirits sank. With Georgiana visiting Rosings Park for the yuletide season, Elizabeth and William had been anticipating a quiet Christmas celebration by themselves. Since they had arrived at Pemberley after their wedding voyage, Elizabeth’s life had been a whirlwind. She had spent much of her time familiarizing herself with the household and the servants, caring for tenants, entertaining neighbors, and performing the many other tasks required of Mrs. Darcy. William had been looking forward to having her to himself over Christmas, and the feeling was very much reciprocated.
Well, Mama and Papa are only two people, Elizabeth reminded herself. And Papa will happily spend much of his time in the library. Certainly I can find a way to occupy Mama.
Elizabeth and her father had just reached the top of the stairs when she heard quick footsteps behind them. Glancing over her shoulder, she found one of the footmen rushing toward her, his brow creased with worry. “Madam, Mr. Giles sent me to inform you. Miss Darcy’s coach is on the drive!”
Elizabeth blinked. Georgiana? What was the matter? Her sister-in-law had planned to visit Rosings Park for at least three more weeks, until Twelfth Night. Although Lady Catherine had initially severed all contact with Pemberley, she had recently insisted on Georgiana’s company—no doubt hoping to counteract Elizabeth’s pernicious influence. Georgiana had assented in part because she hoped to mend the breach between her brother and her aunt, although William had told her not to bother.
Elizabeth turned to her father. “Papa, I must meet Georgiana’s coach. Sally will help with anything you might need, and I shall see you at supper.”
Her father patted her hand reassuringly. Elizabeth quickly retreated down the great marble staircase. Georgiana was just entering the house. The slight woman was rumpled from travel, and some of her blonde curls tumbled into her eyes. But Elizabeth was most concerned about the signs of strain around the younger woman’s mouth and the tension in her shoulders.
Giles took Georgiana’s pelisse and bonnet, and then Elizabeth hurried to embrace her. “Is there trouble, my dear?” Elizabeth asked. “Are you feeling quite well?”
“Yes, my health is good.” Georgiana grimaced. “But William was correct. Visiting Rosings was most unpleasant. Aunt Catherine took every opportunity to disparage you and William. In addition, she invited two young men—both distant relatives of hers—to Rosings. It is clear they think they can be my suitors.” Elizabeth bit her tongue against a quick retort. How dare her ladyship ambush Georgiana in such a way? “It was so uncomfortable.”
This was one of the longest speeches Elizabeth had ever heard from Darcy’s sister; clearly she was quite disturbed. Elizabeth squeezed Georgiana’s hand sympathetically. “I can understand. Were they both so terrible?”
Georgiana sighed, pushing curls from her eyes. “Perhaps not, but I am not prepared to meet suitors, particularly without you and William to give me advice.”
Of course. After the Wickham debacle, Georgiana would be reluctant to trust her own judgment about men. Lady Catherine should not have attempted to influence her niece’s matrimonial prospects, but obviously she hoped to circumvent William’s authority. Elizabeth could think of several things to say about the woman, but she held her tongue.
“I decided to come home. I hope you are not too disappointed with me.”
Elizabeth gave her another hug. “Of course not, darling. I am very happy to see you, and William will be as well. He is out visiting tenants but will be home for supper. We would have missed you at Christmas! Oh, and my parents have come to visit from Longbourn as well.”
Georgiana gave a gentle smile. “How lovely. We shall be a merry party!”
Yes, thought Elizabeth. Hopefully my mother will not celebrate Christmas by discussing how we will be murdered in our beds.
Georgiana gave her sister-in-law another hug. “And you have decorated so nicely for the yule season. Mama never hung greens before Christmas Eve.”
Elizabeth smiled despite another reminder of her decorating deficiencies.
Georgiana took her leave and climbed wearily up the stairs toward her bedchamber. Although Elizabeth was pleased to have her sister-in-law home for the yule season, she could not prevent a pang of regret over more loss of privacy. But it is a big house, Elizabeth thought as she watched Georgiana disappear up the stairs. She is merely one more person. We shall hardly notice her.
Elizabeth had only taken one step toward the stairs when a brisk knock sounded on the door. Oh no, what now? Elizabeth fervently prayed for a wayward deliveryman.
Giles hastened to open the door. Elizabeth instantly recognized the tall figure silhouetted against the pale winter sky. “Richard!” she exclaimed.

A Very Darcy Christmas Available for Pre-order

My next P&P variation, A Very Darcy Christmas, will be available on Amazon this Sunday, November 27th.  You can pre-order it now at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Smashwords, iTunes, Kobo, and elsewhere.

https://www.amazon.com/Very-Darcy-Christmas-Prejudice-Variation-ebook/dp/B01MSOPZGR/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1479966009&sr=1-1&keywords=a+very+darcy+christmas

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My Adventures at JASNA AGM

I wasn’t quite sure what to expect from my first Jane Austen Society of North America (JASNA) Annual General Meeting (AGM).  Many other JAFF authors had attended past AGMs and seemed to enjoy them, but I wasn’t sure what I would find at my first AGM in Washington DC.

I learned a couple things.  One is that the AGM is huge: more than 850 attendees!  I knew Austen had a lot of fans, but wow!  Another was that the conference itself was a very fun hybrid of the Modern Language Association Conference and Comic Con.  Where else could you find women attending lectures on class and gender in Emma while wearing full img_0774Regency regalia?

AGM panels during the day have quite an academic bent, examining aspects of Austen’s works through literary and historical lenses.   I particularly enjoyed one that explored how Emma uses humor as a strategy as a woman in a male-dominated world.  It got me thinking about how humor functions in many of Austen’s other novels.

AGM attendees also had the opportunity to enjoy tours of Washington, DC, Mount Vernon, or Annapolis as well as special exhibits at the Folger Shakespeare Library (about Shakespeare and Austen) and the DAR museum (about Regency fashion).  There were also musical performances and a theatrical production of Sense and Sensibility.  An emporium during the day sold Austen related books, gifts, teas, and other items, as well as offering img_0792Regency costume rentals.

The highlight of the conference, however, was Saturday night—starting with an elegant and delicious dinner.  This was followed by a promenade around the many levels of the hotel, which gave attendees an opportunity to show off their beautiful Regency garb.  You haven’t lived until you’ve seen two levels of escalators covered in people wearing 1800s fashions.  There were some truly spectacular dresses!  I was quite envious. J  After the promenade there was an evening of Regency dancing.  A wonderful woman directed the myriad dancers at a speed slow enough that novices could participate.  Everyone looked just beautiful!

With all of that to enjoy, however, I have to say that my favorite thing about JASNA wasimg_0831 the camaraderie.   I had a chance to meet two of my Facebook buddies whom I had never seen face-to-face before—and made new friends as well. Where else can you go to find people who get just as excited about Austen as you do? Or who are equally knowledgeable?  Total strangers are interested in debating why a character did something or how the settings from two different books compare.  Perhaps your household is different, but my family tends to start rolling their eyes after too much Austen talk. J There’s no such thing at JASNA.

If you have an opportunity to attend an AGM, I would encourage you to consider it—even if you don’t know anyone who is attending.  You can go for the lectures, the exhibits, the costumes, the shopping, the dancing, or the friendships you might make.  But the best reason of all to attend is because Jane Austen fans are your tribe!

The Trial of Susan B. Anthony and Why Women Should Vote

This blog doesn’t have anything to do with Jane Austen, except to say that I believe she would have been a firm supporter of women’s right to vote and would have exercised that right if she had had it.  Instead, this blog is about another amazing woman: Susan B. Anthony.

The women’s suffrage movement was born out of a meeting at a church in Seneca Falls New York in 1848.  The Nineteenth Amendment, giving women the right to vote was passed 72 years later in 1920.  So, in 2020, women will have had the right to vote for one hundred years.

A while ago I learned of an incident in the life of Susan B. Anthony in which she was arrested for casting a vote in an election.  Before becoming a novelist I was a playwright, and I thought this would make a good subject for a play—which it did.  It actually won a couple of awards. J

In writing the play I discovered it was not hard to convince my audience that women should have the right to vote.  However, it was hard for audience members to understand why suffragists like Susan B. Anthony had such a great struggle.

There were many issues discussed at the convention, but suffrage was not the primary one.  In fact, many of the attendees thought women’s suffrage was too unattainable and too controversial.  Instead, one of their primary concerns was the rights of married women to keep their property.  At the time when a woman married, all of her property became her husband’s—her money, her land, her clothing, her children.  One suffrage speaker used to give the example of a woman who tried to sue her dentist for doing a bad job with her false teeth.  The court ruled that she couldn’t sue the dentist because she had no standing—her teeth belonged to her husband.

Despite this political climate, the cause of women’s suffrage was officially taken up by Susan B. Anthony and Elizabeth Cady Stanton in 1866.  They traveled around the country giving speeches and trying to persuade male congressmen to put forth an amendment.  But the idea of women’s suffrage wasn’t gaining traction.

In 1872 Susan B. Anthony tried a new tactic.  Claiming that there was no law specifically against women voting, she registered to vote in Rochester NY.  The Rochester Union and Advertiser editorialized: “Citizenship no more carries the right to vote that it carries the power to fly to the moon…If these women in the Eighth Ward offer to vote, they should be challenged, and if they take the oaths and the Inspectors receive and deposit their ballots, they should all be prosecuted to the full extent of the law.”

Along with thirteen other women, Anthony cast her vote in the election of that year. She voted for Ulysses S. Grant for president.  Anthony wrote to Stanton:  “Well I have gone & done it!!–positively voted the Republican ticket–strait this a.m. at 7 O’clock.  So we are in for a fine agitation in Rochester on the question.”

She was right. Her actions put the authorities in a quandary.  Anthony was a well-born, educated woman—and quite famous by then; they did not want to risk the negative publicity of putting her in jail.   However, they did not want to encourage other women to vote.  So they finally did arrest her.

This is Anthony’s description of the arresting officer arriving at her house:  “He sat down.  He said it was pleasant weather.  He hemmed and hawed and finally said Commissioner Storrs wanted to see me….”what for?” I asked.  “To arrest you.” said he.  “Is that the way you arrest men?” “No.”  Then I demanded that I should be arrested properly.”  According to another account, Anthony at this point held out her wrists and demanded to be handcuffed.

I can just imagine the arresting officer being sheepish and apologetic about having to arrest a well-dressed 52-year-old woman who represented no immediate danger to anyone.  Anthony didn’t make it easier for him.  In fact, I think she enjoyed his discomfiture.

She was tried in Canandaigua NY with a jury—in her words– “not of her peers” since women could not serve on juries.  Her lawyer, John Selden, called Anthony as a witness, but the district attorney objected: “She is not a competent as a witness on her own behalf” because she was a woman.  The judge did not allow her to testify.

Selden defended her with the assertion that she believed the fourteenth amendment “legally entitled her to vote,” and that she “voted in good faith in the belief that it was her right, she was guilty of no crime.” He asserted:  “If the same act had been done by her brother…the act would have been not only innocent, but honorable and laudable. I believe this is the first instance in which a woman has been arraigned in a criminal court merely on account of her sex.”

After the district attorney rested his case, the judge drew a paper from his pocket and read an opinion that he had prepared before the trial started—and directed the jury to find a verdict of guilty.  Not a single member of the jury uttered a word during the whole trial; but, their verdict might have led to a different outcome.

Anthony then made a speech, although the judge told her to sit down about a dozen times.  She said, “When I was brought before your honor for trial, I hoped for a broad and liberal interpretation of the Constitution–that should declare…equality of rights the national guarantee to all persons born or naturalized in the United States. But failing to get this justice–failing, even, to get a trial by a jury not of my peers–I ask not leniency at your hands, but rather the full rigors of the law.”

So, she asked him—since she had been found guilty—to put her in jail.   The judge ordered a fine of $100 and when Anthony announced that she would not pay one penny, the judge said:  “Madam, the Court will not order you committed until the fine is paid.”  So, he basically said they would put her in jail if she paid the fine.  It doesn’t make any sense – although it does show how badly they didn’t want to make her a martyr for the cause.   So, Anthony was free to go.

The trial was covered by all of the national newspapers and helped win sympathy for her cause.   Anthony continued to campaign for women’s suffrage until her death in 1906, 14 years before women won the right to vote.

I was not prepared for the profound effect writing the play had on my own thinking.  In history class we learn about the American Revolution and the founding fathers who sacrificed for our voting rights.  But I realized that women have an additional and separate layer of the struggle for voting rights—as well as people who sacrificed for us.  We have people like Susan B. Anthony who was willing to go to jail for our right to vote.  Many later suffragists were arrested and jailed—even harassed and beaten by the police.

Women in Switzerland didn’t win the right to vote until 1971.  And there are plenty of countries today where women cannot vote.   We cannot take the right for granted.

After writing the play I resolved that I would vote in every election—even the small, seemingly insignificant municipal elections. Because I only have that right because women who came before me sacrificed for it.  And because it’s my way of honoring the legacy of Susan B. Anthony and other suffragists like her.

Today it is the custom for women to put their “I voted” stickers on Anthony’s tombstone in Rochester.  It is because of her we can vote.

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4.5 Stars from Austenesque Reviews!

Chaos Comes to Longbourn received 4.5 out of 5 stars from Austenesque Reviews.  In her review, Meredith wrote, “Chaos Comes to Longbourn is a deliciously wicked romantic romp that will have readers chortling in delight and quickly turning the pages! Definitely a perfect choice for readers in search of an amusing and unique variation to captivate their attention!”

Chaos Comes to Longbourn – Victoria Kincaid

Photos from JASNA AGM

Over the weekend I attended the Jane Austen Society of North America’s Annual General Meeting.  It was a blast!  Below are photos from the most photogenic parts:  the Promenade (which included many people in Regency garb on escalators) and the Regency Dancing after dinner.

This Review Comes with a Bonus Recipe!

Many of my books have been reviewed, but this is the first one that had a review and a recipe that was inspired by the book!  The book is Chaos Comes to Longbourn, which received a great review from Heather at All Roads Lead to the Kitchen.  And the recipe is Apple Brandy Punch (doesn’t that sound yummy?).

Heather writes: “This tangled web of mismatched lovers does eventually right itself, but the fun part came in finding out how—a must-read for all Janeites!”

http://www.allroadsleadtothe.kitchen/2016/10/apple-brandy-punch.html

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