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The First Draft is the Hardest

I finished!!! I wrote the last scene and the last word of my first draft  (tentatively entitled Pride and Proposals) ! This is the hardest part of the process — for me and for many writers, I believe.  Once you have something on paper, and you’re not facing a blank screen, it’s so much easier to revise.  Even if you have to throw out pages and pages (and I have), you’re better off having something to work with.  That’s why I always try to write the first draft quickly (I’m not always successful) and give myself permission for it to be crappy.  If I worry about each sentence construction or word choice, I’d never get through the first page.  Those considerations are for the next draft.

So, I’m going to celebrate with some chocolate and then start on the second draft.

The funny thing is, when I finish the first draft, I always think it’s awful (because I wrote fast and didn’t worry about a lot of details), but then when I go through to revise I often think, “Hey, this isn’t so bad!”  Of course, sometimes that doesn’t happen, which is a sign that my first draft needs major surgery.  Nothing to do but get out the scalpel….

Does anyone else have this experience with their second draft?


Why Do So Many People Want to be Writers?

Recently I’ve read two blogs by published authors talking about annoying reactions they have gotten when they have told a casual acquaintance that they write novels.  I’ve been a creative writer my whole life and I’m familiar with the scenario.  A lot of times you get a reaction along the lines of “I’m working on a novel too!”  or “I’ve always wanted to write” or “I’d write if I had more time” or “I have this great idea….” Many people seem to think that with a little time and effort, they too could be a writer just like you.

I always wonder if this happens to people in other creative professions. My guess is that if you say you’re a ballet dancer, you don’t get 45-year-old fellow party guests who say, “I’ve been meaning to take up a professional ballet career.”  You might get someone who used to take (or even is taking) ballet lessons, but they don’t have aspirations to greatness in the field.  Okay, but that’s an age thing.  What about music or art?  Although you can do some guitar playing or drawing with little or no instruction, most people would recognize that if you want to seriously pursue music or art (either as a professional or a serious amateur), you need to undertake a lot of studying and practicing.  In other words: hard work.

Writing, on the other hand, looks easily accessible as an artistic pursuit.  Everyone knows the English language, right?   You can take it up when you’re 45 or 60 or 75.  You don’t need to buy a tuba or oil paints.  Here’s the problem:  Yes, anyone can write.  However, writing well takes a lot (and I mean a lot) of practice.  I’ve been writing creatively for more than 20 years and I don’t feel like I’ve perfected it.  It also helps to get good feedback from a support/critique group and instruction. (yeah, I know some people say creative writing can’t be taught, but you can teach the techniques of effective writing in the same way you teach brushstrokes or  reading music.)  Feedback and instruction help you hone your technique, but there’s no substitute for practice.  You wouldn’t expect to go to a basketball game for the first time and sink every shot you make.  Or do a perfect pirouette at your first (or fifth or fifteenth) ballet class.  Or sculpt a coherent statue out of a hunk of marble without help.  Just because you know the basics of writing — or even if you’ve been doing writing at your job — it doesn’t mean you have developed all the techniques you need for writing a novel.

Actually, I think a lot of people know this (at least subconsciously), but don’t want to believe it.  I believe this is why writers encounter a lot of people who want to be a writer.  There’s no age limit, so it’s something you can always aspire to be.  But a lot of would-be writers have tried writing the Great American Novel and found that it’s more difficult than they expected (hence the “I’m working on a novel too” syndrome).  It’s discouraging to have a vision and then discover that your writing isn’t up to the task of creating that vision perfectly (believe me, I understand!).  But, rather than practicing their writing by sitting at the computer every day (even for 15 minutes) or honing their skills with feedback from a group or instructor, a lot of these people would rather tell themselves and imply to everyone else, that they would become great writers if only they had enough time.  It’s scary to write.  I know!  But the only way to become a good writer is to write.  A lot.

Anyway, that’s my opinion.  What do you think?